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Linch's avatar

Reminds me a bit of Andy Weir's The Egg, but with less insane metaphysical assumptions. Not bad!

dov's avatar

This is from the perspective of sentience right? And ends with AI gaining it?

Bentham's Bulldog's avatar

I've heard from the Powers That Be that you're not supposed to reveal what poems are about.

dov's avatar

Lol ur prob right. I guess poems aren't my cup of tea but thanks for replying and all ur other essays :)

Zeb Camp's avatar

Confirmed bloomer

tragic world's avatar

The perfect poem for the beginning of Lent/Ramadan, in anticipation of Easter/Eid.

Grantford's avatar

This reminds me of Lovecraft's "Nemesis", mentioned in the previous post. Much of it could similarly be set to "Piano Man"!